motodraconis: (SpaceGirl)
motodraconis ([personal profile] motodraconis) wrote2006-04-24 09:29 am
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April's Episode.

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SpaceGirl Episode 20April's episode now up.

Vassily gets a date.

[identity profile] sammason.livejournal.com 2006-04-24 09:02 am (UTC)(link)
Good storyline! I could read the girl's emotion from her posture(bewilderment at being rejected - is that what you intended?) and the panel with Vassily's horror-struck face close up is excellent. I like the development of his relationship with Kali and I think there's more emotion there that you could explore. How does his attitude to her protective role change, now that he's been frightened? Does he confide in her? Or perhaps in one of the other characters? Is his attitude to women maturing or has this experience sent him further into desire/fear objectification? Am I over-analysing? ;-P at least it shows your story is interesting!
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[personal profile] lethe1 2006-04-24 10:10 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, that was a surprising end to the date!

I forgot to tell you, but when you posted your previous update I finally read Spacegirl all the way from the beginning, and also your other comics, and I enjoyed them a lot. I have to confess that Clarry the cockroach is still my favourite character, will we see more of him? :)

[identity profile] ingaborg.livejournal.com 2006-04-24 11:39 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, poor Vassily! Wow, traumatic.

[identity profile] trav28.livejournal.com 2006-04-24 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
heh = now I didn't expect that with the toungue!

Your colouring is f'ing fantastic!

[identity profile] gm-cow.livejournal.com 2006-04-24 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
She revealed it all on a first date...

The brazen hussy! ;)

[identity profile] melissa-ally.livejournal.com 2006-04-25 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
LOL, I hope none of my dates will ever attempt a kiss like that!???

[identity profile] velvetfur.livejournal.com 2006-04-30 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
*sigh* Dont'cha just hate when someone tries to kiss you with the extra apendage that springs from their mouth without previously preparing you?!! :P