Good storyline! I could read the girl's emotion from her posture(bewilderment at being rejected - is that what you intended?) and the panel with Vassily's horror-struck face close up is excellent. I like the development of his relationship with Kali and I think there's more emotion there that you could explore. How does his attitude to her protective role change, now that he's been frightened? Does he confide in her? Or perhaps in one of the other characters? Is his attitude to women maturing or has this experience sent him further into desire/fear objectification? Am I over-analysing? ;-P at least it shows your story is interesting!
I forgot to tell you, but when you posted your previous update I finally read Spacegirl all the way from the beginning, and also your other comics, and I enjoyed them a lot. I have to confess that Clarry the cockroach is still my favourite character, will we see more of him? :)
Wow! That's deep, I admit I generally focus on getting my cheesy gags across, but you've made some good points and got me thinking. I shall mull over what you said, I'd like to work that sort of thing in if I can.... I'm just not very good at it!
no subject
no subject
no subject
no subject
no subject
I forgot to tell you, but when you posted your previous update I finally read Spacegirl all the way from the beginning, and also your other comics, and I enjoyed them a lot. I have to confess that Clarry the cockroach is still my favourite character, will we see more of him? :)
no subject
no subject
no subject
no subject
no subject
Cockroach.
(Grins.)
no subject
I shall mull over what you said, I'd like to work that sort of thing in if I can.... I'm just not very good at it!
Wanders off thoughtfully...
no subject
no subject
Your colouring is f'ing fantastic!
no subject
The brazen hussy! ;)
no subject
Revealed it all?
Re: Revealed it all?
no subject
Bah!
Re: Revealed it all?
no subject
no subject
no subject
no subject